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1.Your Answer: My thesis statement is strong, as it clearly and concisely states my main argument. However, I could improve the focus of my thesis statement by offering more specific details and examples to support my argument. For example, I could discuss specific instances in which my thesis statement could be applied to improve the current system, or provide evidence to support my point of view. 2.Yes 3.This draft is adequately developed, but could use some additional development in certain areas. For example, the thesis could be more clearly articulated, and the author could provide more evidence to support their claims. Besides, the author could delve deeper into the sources they cite, providing further analysis and detail on how the sources support their argument.