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Critical Self-Reflection 4

Critical Self-Reflection 4

Q Question 1 A THESIS STATEMENT is the one sentence that articulates the main argument, and FOCUS means the thesis statement and the way every word in each annotation serves to support that thesis statement. FOCUS: What do you think are the strengths and weaknesses of your thesis statement and overall focus in this draft? Please explain your answer, citing specific examples where appropriate. (2-3 sentences minimum) * Question 2 Would you like your Writing Specialist to offer you FOCUS strategies for this draft? * You Answered Question 3 For this assignment, each annotation should include three major ideas to present a well-DEVELOPED annotation. The annotations also should work to DEVELOP support for the thesis statement. DEVELOPMENT: Is this draft well developed? In what ways could development be improved? Please explain your answer, citing specific examples of passages you want help with. (2-3 sentence minimum) *

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1.Your Answer: My thesis statement is strong, as it clearly and concisely states my main argument. However, I could improve the focus of my thesis statement by offering more specific details and examples to support my argument. For example, I could discuss specific instances in which my thesis statement could be applied to improve the current system, or provide evidence to support my point of view. 2.Yes 3.This draft is adequately developed, but could use some additional development in certain areas. For example, the thesis could be more clearly articulated, and the author could provide more evidence to support their claims. Besides, the author could delve deeper into the sources they cite, providing further analysis and detail on how the sources support their argument.